Pezmobile's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Our World {durn}]

Pretty sweet

It was kinda repetitive but thats the only reason i gave you a 9 the lead synth is really cool and addictive. Woah it just looped and i didn't realize it, I love it when songs do that.

I'm gonna check out some of ur other stuff cus this is great.

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durn responds:

yeah, my roommate was saying the same about the lead melody, shoulda changed it up more. glad you found the synth suited to the track though! :D and woohoo on checkin' out the library! :d

[Chihuahua loop]

OMG I LOL'D SO HARD!!!!!!!!!

That is just amazing. very stupid, but amazing

Stalagmite responds:

its pretty ridiuculous ^ ^ hehe, CHIHUAHUA! thanks bud!

[<Flymusik> To a Higher Level]

just sick

Have you ever heard session by linkin park? The whole intro reminds me of it with that pad. The main thing that i would change is to make the guitars louder as well as the kick a little too. Other than that i really like it.

It sucks that ur leaving NG.
If you find another better music hosting site tell me about it please.

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FlyMusik responds:

Actually i'm coming back. I've decided to stop looking at scores now. Besides, i may be on iTunes and CDBaby soon, so i'm back on NG....again. Only reason i don't want to come back is that i've been off and on for a whil and i don't want people to think i can't keep my word. But yes, i am coming back on NG. I haven't heard session. I know of it, though, and my friend also said that the intro was copying linkin park. It was mainly inspired by the song p5hing me a*wy, also by linkin park.

[Solus- Shatterface]

its not really DnB

It would make a nice hiphop track if you slowed it down a little and turned down the synth. I like the panning of the drums although the pan on that beepy synth was unnecessary.

Overall its a pretty good song but definately not DnB.

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SolusLunes responds:

I have NO IDEA what to call it. Really.

ffs I need my own genres.

Also, "that beepy synth" was actually three seperate synths, one panned left, one right, and one centered. :D

[CKC - Tide]

Sweet!

Congrats on your first top 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (this is your first right?)

I just love this one.

I usually right some constructive criticism but i can't think of anything wrong with this song. Its just perfect from start to end.

Great job man

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CKC2009 responds:

lol yh my first top 5 :)

[CKC - Tears Apart]

Wow...

simply stunning my friend. Thats the best song by you i've ever heard.
the beat was perfectly executed and the piano was beautiful. Maybe you could have had some rain sound FX in the background or something to add to the emotion a little.

Keep making awesome music dude.

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CKC2009 responds:

yh maybe.. :)

[CKC - Everyday]

Very cool

The tune is really cool but the drums in the beginning don't fit the mood of the song. Also the clap could be a different louder clap than the one you have. You should also try to distinguish between your hiphop songs and your trance songs, for instance, since this is a hiphop song the beat should be alot louder and you should turn down the synth a bit.

Disregarding the genre issues, this song is awesome.

Oh and you should check out my hiphop remix of Military Storm too.
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/276373

I'm out

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CKC2009 responds:

Ok boss btw next time can u please not advertise on my song :P

thanks for review!!

[Dark Dnb(demo)]

Not so bad for a first.

Some tips tho cus ur new:

1. The quality of this isn't so good so save it in a higher quality. DnB especially needs to be in high quality.

2. The drums aren't loud enough and volume leveling is an essential ability no matter what genre your doing.

3. DnB is a very hard genre to pull off and you did pretty good but i would suggest trying out different genres to not only find the one that you're the best at but to get a feel for all types of music.

Hope i could help

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jon189t responds:

Thanks man! I'm just confused though. Your review says my drums aren't loud enough and the other guy says they are too loud..? Anyway, I've tried a rock/electronic music genre before and its actually my first song, this song is just my first DnB song(and submission). Check out "Revelation and Spies"

[Constructive Destruction]

Pretty sweet

Anyone who hates on this song has no appreciation for music whatsoever. Your technique is phenomenal and i've never heard anything like it before. It starts to get a bit annoying towards the end but its still awesome.

InvisibleObserver responds:

Slowly its score declines.

Its too bad you feel its annoying, but that's bound to happen.

Check out the "Lady in the Radiator - Eraserhead" On youtube, the video will make this song make a lot more sense.

I may however be lying just to get you to watch a really weird video clip.

Where will your curiosity lead you?

[Spectrosphere]

Awesome

Not that its bad the way it is but in the beginning is sounded lid it could have a hardcore hip hop beat on it and it would sound really nice. Your kick needs to be a lot stronger and the clap could be a bit louder too with some reverb on it. I have no problem with the synth except thats its a bit too loud. I really like the part from 1:10 to 1:36. You need to work on your technique a little but overall its really good.

RedWingX responds:

thanks for the review. i will try and change up that kick then. i noticed the kick didnt pop enough so i will work on that a bit. thanks again.

edit: kk fixed it up a bit.