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[basshunter remix[demo updated]]

good for a start...

It was good up until a minute when he drop came in. There's some distortion going on i'm not sure if thats from the volume or the resonance but either way fix that.

The precussion should come in gradually because the build up is way too long. May be start with some hihats and a clap at around 0:36.

Fix your bass too, its too loud. bass is supposed to be in the background and add to the song lightly. Also add some more effects to the synths such as flangers and phasers because they will boost the sound quality alot.

Overall you really need better precussion because that really will make or brake your song and in this case it broke it.

Dang this was a long review...

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killamnjaro responds:

thanks! yea there are some automation clips that cause the pop. im gonna do my best to fix that in the full version. this is not so much a demo as it is a beta. i put it out there to get ideas on how to improve it, that way the final version is as good as it can be.
if it wasnt reviews like yours then my music would be much worse. i like your idea of the preccustion coming more gradually and normally i would be working on it right now but because im away from my work computer i cant do anything at this point. but still i thank you for your critecism.

dang that was a long responce...

[-Northern Lights-]

Pretty good

I like this alot. Although it doesn't have a climax at all. Thats really the only problem though. The song is quite relaxing and the title fits it well.

Keep experimenting and this could be alot better.

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Elph responds:

Thanks :)

[Drum Beat 1-JJdaDJ]

Theres a reason why its called drum and bass.

it needs bass...

sorry for the harsh review but this song is not good

[[AMP] You Belong Here]

Lovin It!

I checked out the original before i reviewed this and this is definitely better. This song just HAD IT. The beat was stronger, the synths were better, the transitions were better. I really liked the intro with the guitars. I kinda wished that you did the same crazy shit with the vocals like the original but its still great.

After listening to the first one this one seems really slow, just saying.

downloading this one for sure.

Awesome Job Dude

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AMP responds:

Ya, i lowered the tempo of the song from 170 to 140 so the song would be have a different feel.

Glad you enjoyed it :D

[Blacksting (Dubstep)]

Pretty cool

Next time make a full song tho. I really don't like loops although this one was alright. It looks like you make a lot of Dubstep stuff, maybe you can check out some of mine.

Thanks

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[[ Infiltration ]]

hmm...

Usually 3 step is in a very happy tune but i like it just as much this way. I might go off and try some 3 step myself.

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[Radosh - Glow]

Hmmm.. Very good.

i like this kinda style (Breaktrance) but the kick and snare have to stand out from the hi hats. Its really good but i think you should work on it a little more and make it alot better.

I like the synths and the overall flow of the song. Good job.

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Radosh responds:

Yeah.. But I was glad that I finished IT xD
Thanks For Your Review

[Compass -KN]

So Calming

I clicked on this song and then went into a different tab to do some thing and it was so calming that it played at least twice before i remembered it was actually playing. (does that make sense?)
Either way its awesome and you deserve a 10.

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JinNJuice responds:

It makes sense. Don't worry.
Thank you for listening. -KN

[[oZ] ~ Nightcrawler (Dubstep)]

Pretty good

I just recantl started making Dubstep too and I'v e got to say this is better than mine. Your technique was great but some of the instruments seemed out of place and the song sounded a bit mushed together.

Check out mine -
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/319584

Keep working at it and you'll master this genre.

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[Dj Otherworld - Cursed Pyramid]

Why the hell didn't i download this the 1st time!

i remember listening to this before and it got me really pumped. I feel like an idiot for not downloading it then.

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