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[CKC - Everyday]

Very cool

The tune is really cool but the drums in the beginning don't fit the mood of the song. Also the clap could be a different louder clap than the one you have. You should also try to distinguish between your hiphop songs and your trance songs, for instance, since this is a hiphop song the beat should be alot louder and you should turn down the synth a bit.

Disregarding the genre issues, this song is awesome.

Oh and you should check out my hiphop remix of Military Storm too.
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/276373

I'm out

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CKC2009 responds:

Ok boss btw next time can u please not advertise on my song :P

thanks for review!!

[Dark Dnb(demo)]

Not so bad for a first.

Some tips tho cus ur new:

1. The quality of this isn't so good so save it in a higher quality. DnB especially needs to be in high quality.

2. The drums aren't loud enough and volume leveling is an essential ability no matter what genre your doing.

3. DnB is a very hard genre to pull off and you did pretty good but i would suggest trying out different genres to not only find the one that you're the best at but to get a feel for all types of music.

Hope i could help

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jon189t responds:

Thanks man! I'm just confused though. Your review says my drums aren't loud enough and the other guy says they are too loud..? Anyway, I've tried a rock/electronic music genre before and its actually my first song, this song is just my first DnB song(and submission). Check out "Revelation and Spies"

[Constructive Destruction]

Pretty sweet

Anyone who hates on this song has no appreciation for music whatsoever. Your technique is phenomenal and i've never heard anything like it before. It starts to get a bit annoying towards the end but its still awesome.

InvisibleObserver responds:

Slowly its score declines.

Its too bad you feel its annoying, but that's bound to happen.

Check out the "Lady in the Radiator - Eraserhead" On youtube, the video will make this song make a lot more sense.

I may however be lying just to get you to watch a really weird video clip.

Where will your curiosity lead you?

[Spectrosphere]

Awesome

Not that its bad the way it is but in the beginning is sounded lid it could have a hardcore hip hop beat on it and it would sound really nice. Your kick needs to be a lot stronger and the clap could be a bit louder too with some reverb on it. I have no problem with the synth except thats its a bit too loud. I really like the part from 1:10 to 1:36. You need to work on your technique a little but overall its really good.

RedWingX responds:

thanks for the review. i will try and change up that kick then. i noticed the kick didnt pop enough so i will work on that a bit. thanks again.

edit: kk fixed it up a bit.

[Moments Of Life.]

Nice job!

Its really good but i keep thinking i've heard the tune before. Some of the transitions could use some touching up. It also need more than just that one melody cus it gets kinda repetitive.

9/10 4/5

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Crystallize responds:

There is more than one melody? But thank you! :)

[Biolysis [Synthetica Demo]]

SWEET!!

But you're right it does need some tweaking. I think that the high hat could be stronger. The sound at 0:24 is the best part of it. I would download it but its only 45 seconds

[[LC] -Overlooked Memories]

WOW!

This is awesome! Theres absolutely nothing wrong with it. Sorry u had swine flu too that had to suck. Usually my reviews are longer but this song is pretty much perfect. I wouldn't be surprised if this made the top 5.

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ElectricalBypass responds:

Haha, I am really glad you liked it. Yeah, the flu really sucked. Thanks for your review!

[Reasoner- Living Transparent]

Wow.....

That was amazing.
I don't have much inspiration lately so i see what i can do to expand upon this song this so for ya although this is beautiful as is. It could take a while but i'll see what i can do. I know what its like to have an awesome tune in ur head and can't do any thing much with it.

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[Take Control (WIP)]

Buildup issues

Its great but the buildup takes way too long i though it was going to get to some thing huge at 0:12 and it doesn't realy get good till 1:30.
Everything else is great you just have some rearranging to do.
I like the voices alot too.

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georgem124 responds:

i may actually use an acapella instead of the vocals, i think it would suit the song more

[**********Shelter**********]

AMAZING!

The first part isn't so good but as soon as the siren thing came it it was pure awesomeness from there. Maybe you could make a bit longer, only like a minute and a half though. It sounds like something thats meant to be short and sweet and wouldn't last for 3 minutes.

Great job dude

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